An Officer and A Gentleman Contest,
In the Name of the Law, o/s

I love how you wrote Edward's confidence in this story. It is not cocky or aloof, but just steadfast. Everything about how you wrote him exudes a confidence. Yet, you coupled it with a caring, genuine guy. I like that you displayed a recent history with the two of them. That they had been interacting as friends since they both returned home, so this wasn't an out of the blue one-night stand or I am instantly in love with you type of story. This was something that was building over time.

The scene with him pinning her against the wall when the person tried to break into the house had my girly bits cheering. Protective, sexy man!

Good luck in the contest!