Beth Sabatino
Marked, Ch. 2-9

I love the story you have created for these boys. It is full of curiosity and the excitement of a new affair. Yet, you have given them both serious emotional baggage when it comes to a committed relationship. They have both jumped to their own sets of conclusions, Edwards uncertainty over Jasper's intentions, and Jasper 'I always jump to conclusions' Whitlock.

There is serious trust issues here. Edward I think is ready to move past his and commit and give Jasper all of him. Jasper, on the other hand, is still re-enforcing his walls every time the mortar starts to crumble. I am hoping we see some trust from him soon, or I am afraid he is going to lose Edward.
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