The Training, Ch. 6-13
I am really enjoying the pace in which this chapter of Bella and Edward's story is moving. We are watching them learn and grow in all the facets of their relationship. Edward is learning how to balance the Dom with the lover. Bella is learning what it means to be a Sub, truly, and also how to let go of that mindset during the week.
I think the scene of her sitting my Edward in Peter's playroom was one of the more erotic things you have written. The literally blind obedience and sexual tension was delicious.
Finally, watching their love grow and surround them. This wedding scene was lovely, and you could see how they have grown from his ease to her confidence. I am looking forward to what living together does to their dynamic.
I am really enjoying the pace in which this chapter of Bella and Edward's story is moving. We are watching them learn and grow in all the facets of their relationship. Edward is learning how to balance the Dom with the lover. Bella is learning what it means to be a Sub, truly, and also how to let go of that mindset during the week.
I think the scene of her sitting my Edward in Peter's playroom was one of the more erotic things you have written. The literally blind obedience and sexual tension was delicious.
Finally, watching their love grow and surround them. This wedding scene was lovely, and you could see how they have grown from his ease to her confidence. I am looking forward to what living together does to their dynamic.
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