Stranger Than Fiction, Ch. 11
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! I haven't laughed that hard about something in fic in a while. I think the way you worded it was what made it perfect. "I lay sprawled on the wet grass, having just fallen from the goddamn tree." HAHAHAHA!!!! So great.
I love that he went into her room. It gives great symmetry to how it all began. We'll just see how receptive she is to seeing him once again. She's not the girl from six years ago. I have a feeling a vampire is about to be brought to his knees by his frail human.
Also, part of me was wondering if he was going to get caught ogling her. :) Like look up from the panties to be met by her stare. I like this just as well.
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! I haven't laughed that hard about something in fic in a while. I think the way you worded it was what made it perfect. "I lay sprawled on the wet grass, having just fallen from the goddamn tree." HAHAHAHA!!!! So great.
I love that he went into her room. It gives great symmetry to how it all began. We'll just see how receptive she is to seeing him once again. She's not the girl from six years ago. I have a feeling a vampire is about to be brought to his knees by his frail human.
Also, part of me was wondering if he was going to get caught ogling her. :) Like look up from the panties to be met by her stare. I like this just as well.
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