Geekward Shuffle Challenge,
About A Geek, o/s

I really liked the two characters you created here. The painfully awkward and shy Edward paired with the effervescent Bella. This couple could be very interesting to read for several chapters. This one-shot would be great as a beginning of a story but with more time between the dry hump on the beach and the declarations. I think it would suit them better with a slow courtship.

I do like these characters, though, and I hope you are inspired to spend more time with them in the future at a slower pace.