Stolen Singer, Ch. 6
So now Bella is equipped with a little bit of information. I hope you keep the pace you started. I like that she is finding things out in pieces. Edward is revealing himself in increments. It makes this story more of a lingering walk on the beach vs. a roller coaster ride. I like this exploration of her change via surprise.
Your Edward is so adorkably cute. Emotionally, he feels like a teenage boy. I like that.
So now Bella is equipped with a little bit of information. I hope you keep the pace you started. I like that she is finding things out in pieces. Edward is revealing himself in increments. It makes this story more of a lingering walk on the beach vs. a roller coaster ride. I like this exploration of her change via surprise.
Your Edward is so adorkably cute. Emotionally, he feels like a teenage boy. I like that.
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