The Lion and The Jackal, Ch. 12
Unfortunately, regaining someone's trust once it has been broken, especially when it comes to the heart, is a slow, uphill battle. I love how absolutely patient you have Edward being with her. He KNOWS he fucked up. He KNOWS he deserves nothing. Yet, he hopes and loves and hopes. Nice small victories towards redemption gained in this one.
The last few lines leave us wondering if she'll allow the truth to be heard, or if we watch Edward body be battered as he falls hard back down the mountain.
Unfortunately, regaining someone's trust once it has been broken, especially when it comes to the heart, is a slow, uphill battle. I love how absolutely patient you have Edward being with her. He KNOWS he fucked up. He KNOWS he deserves nothing. Yet, he hopes and loves and hopes. Nice small victories towards redemption gained in this one.
The last few lines leave us wondering if she'll allow the truth to be heard, or if we watch Edward body be battered as he falls hard back down the mountain.
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