Beth Sabatino
Ride the Wind, Ch. 1-11

I LOVE this story! It was an easy draw for me from the word Harley. I grew up on them, and a man on a Harley...an EDWARD on a Harley! Forget about it.

Many stories start with a one night stand type of set-up, but you have made that feel brand new. It was a great damsel in distress and knight on chrome and two wheels, but the conversation between them leading to her taking his offer had a great ease and playfulness to it. You let them build up a relationship, yet you didn't make your characters keep each other at a distance or follow some contrived version of how they thought society felt they should proceed. They made their own rules. They are still making their own rules.

This love affair is open. Open to the possibility of love and communicative. They are making such great strides in such short time, because they do talk. They don't shy away from the hard stuff.

The Jake stuff was shocking, and I am so happy that she was gotten to in time. Hopefully, they can get through the trial now, and begin to heal emotionally, and move forward with their life.

I can't wait to read more!
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