Beth Sabatino
Art Model, Ch. 1

I love the arc that you took Bella on in this story (chapter 1 of a story, or one-shot?). You take her from a terrified girl to a confident woman. She takes a chance, and you never know what wonderful things will come you way when you put yourself out there.

I think this would be interesting as a full story, but it is also completely enjoyable as a one-shot! Wonderful job!
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