Beth Sabatino
The Mirrors, Ch 18

The story/myth/legend of the families has me in complete and utter awe. Not only is it an amazing addition to this story, but I am in a state of amazement at your creativity in the writing. Your clever twists of fate. The weaving of Bella and Edward's histories. There are no words. Such very smart writing.

If that is not enough, you add in the heart to heart between Bella and Carlisle on the porch. I can't imagine the agony that he has suffered through the years. First, to think that your child has lost their mind. Then to see them feign wellness, when you know it is a lie. Finally, to realize that this was all truth in the end. That would be completely overwhelming.

Once again, we bow at the feet of the master.
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