Passion and Disaster, Ch 17
I really loved this chapter. You really gave Edward depth. I was afraid, after the previous chapters, that Edward was going to end up being selfish and almost childish in his reactions. Thank-you for making him be the clarity in the confusion. I love that he sees Alice and Jasper more than they do themselves. They do have a dependence on each other that is not entirely healthy. It was particularly mind opening when he said "It was Jasper needed Alice to make everything normal again."
Edwards fears are completely founded, and he has been hurt enough in his lifetime to not go into this lightly. He deserves Jasper's complete and utter devotion.
I really loved this chapter. You really gave Edward depth. I was afraid, after the previous chapters, that Edward was going to end up being selfish and almost childish in his reactions. Thank-you for making him be the clarity in the confusion. I love that he sees Alice and Jasper more than they do themselves. They do have a dependence on each other that is not entirely healthy. It was particularly mind opening when he said "It was Jasper needed Alice to make everything normal again."
Edwards fears are completely founded, and he has been hurt enough in his lifetime to not go into this lightly. He deserves Jasper's complete and utter devotion.
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