Beth Sabatino
Volterra Rocks!, ch 17

Edward truly is the caged bird in this story. I am happy that Bella can see past her own past infatuation to embrace the sheltered man that is before her. She finally realized that it was not her that was holding back their intimacy, but his inexperience and insecurity in that lack of experience.

It is funny how it is empowering to be the one with the experience. I am glad that Bella found courage in her past in order to give Edward his first steps into sexuality.

Finally, the confession of love. Edward's timing was poor, but there was no doubt that he was disarmed by the moment, and the feelings he has been harboring for months poured forth.
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