At The Deep End, Ch 17

The love affair between these boys is unfolding in such a beautiful fashion on the page. There is nothing but tenderness and honesty. Their first time together was everything it should have been. Confessions of love. Slow gentle care of Jasper. Jasper wanting the connection above all else. This is a thesis on how to write the coming together of two lovers. You wrapped us all in the cocoon of their love and allowed us to share this moment with your characters.

Beautifully, beautifully written.