Spy Games, ch 8
I understand Bella is confused by her situation with Edward, but the chapter seemed a little desperate and adolescent for her personality. One of the things I love(d?) about this story was a large and in charge Bella. She seems to have disappeared a bit in light of her uncertainty. I don't mind her being a mess at home, but I have come to think that Bella brings nothing but her A game to work.
NOTE: I received a sincere review reply from the author on this one thanking me for my honesty and constructive review. She has gotten Bella back on track with Chapter 9.
I understand Bella is confused by her situation with Edward, but the chapter seemed a little desperate and adolescent for her personality. One of the things I love(d?) about this story was a large and in charge Bella. She seems to have disappeared a bit in light of her uncertainty. I don't mind her being a mess at home, but I have come to think that Bella brings nothing but her A game to work.
NOTE: I received a sincere review reply from the author on this one thanking me for my honesty and constructive review. She has gotten Bella back on track with Chapter 9.
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