Volterra Rocks!, ch 16
What would Emmett do I'd he didn't have Jasper and Edward to torture for money or fun. Though at the end of the day, he does it to motivate them towards their happiness.
I loved Alice in this one. She didn't go batshit crazy, but took the control away from Maria in her own way. She out smarted her and displayed for Jasper that she is clearly the better woman.
I love that you are continuing to keep Edward and Bella's relationship at a gradual pace. It is very suiting of the characters you have developed.
Great chapter!
What would Emmett do I'd he didn't have Jasper and Edward to torture for money or fun. Though at the end of the day, he does it to motivate them towards their happiness.
I loved Alice in this one. She didn't go batshit crazy, but took the control away from Maria in her own way. She out smarted her and displayed for Jasper that she is clearly the better woman.
I love that you are continuing to keep Edward and Bella's relationship at a gradual pace. It is very suiting of the characters you have developed.
Great chapter!
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