Mr. Horrible, Ch. 26-28
Chapter 26
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Your description of Edward's morning shenanigans through Bella's eyes was hi-larious!
Once again, you make me adore your story and your characters with their honesty. If it is all going to go to shit, let it be done on an honest wafer. Yet, they keep getting stronger. Love it.
Chapter 27
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It is hard to remember at times that this relationship is not even 2 months old. Sometimes I find myself wondering, "Why are they doubting the other, or why isn't the other doubting their intentions?" or "Why don't they know better?" Oh yeah, because they haven't gotten that far.
Once again, the cleverness of their banter leaves me in awe.
Chapter 28
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The fucking fish spits the engagement ring into her hand. That's perfect...for them. Birkin should be the one who proposes.
I loved how pissy Edward and Laurent were with Bella, when they thought she was selling out to the man's ideal of a perfect future Mrs. Edward Cullen the Not-Quite-Second.
Now that they are in-line for some permanence, it will be interesting to see if/how it affects their relationship.
Chapter 26
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Your description of Edward's morning shenanigans through Bella's eyes was hi-larious!
Once again, you make me adore your story and your characters with their honesty. If it is all going to go to shit, let it be done on an honest wafer. Yet, they keep getting stronger. Love it.
Chapter 27
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It is hard to remember at times that this relationship is not even 2 months old. Sometimes I find myself wondering, "Why are they doubting the other, or why isn't the other doubting their intentions?" or "Why don't they know better?" Oh yeah, because they haven't gotten that far.
Once again, the cleverness of their banter leaves me in awe.
Chapter 28
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The fucking fish spits the engagement ring into her hand. That's perfect...for them. Birkin should be the one who proposes.
I loved how pissy Edward and Laurent were with Bella, when they thought she was selling out to the man's ideal of a perfect future Mrs. Edward Cullen the Not-Quite-Second.
Now that they are in-line for some permanence, it will be interesting to see if/how it affects their relationship.
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