Beth Sabatino
Poughkeepsie, Ch 38-39

I see you have discovered the Emmett love affair that I have with my current story. Even if you intend for him to be a minor supporting role, he always finds his way to play a more prominent role. Once again, your "big brother" is protecting all under his watch. Not only is he prepared to strike for his brother, but the woman he loves, and the people she loves as well. His protection of Alice was fantastic.

Little girl lost, on the other hand, is once again a smorgasbord of self-destruction. I am completely empathetic as a girl with my own mommy issues, so it is equally as sad to see her reach to find love and intimacy. Jasper silently riding in to her rescue was perfect.
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