Beth Sabatino
Guarding Edward, ch 33

I loved Esme sitting down and having the "sex talk" with Bella. It's a good thing she was a rider, otherwise poor Edward might have hurt his poor peen on the wedding night running into a granite hymen. LOL!

Your detail of the wedding was beautiful, and more than I could have hoped for. I loved your detailing of the decorations, clothing, ceremony, and reception. I loved how you spent time from both perspectives so we could share in the joy and happiness of both Edward and Bella.

The next chapter is going to be interesting!
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