Crushed Seraphim, Ch. 10-11
Chapter 10
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GAH! I'm torn. I'm always down for a good lemon, but the moment doesn't seem right for me. He's moving forward out of feelings of love, and she is using him as a tool to dull the pain for a while. So I vote no, because it would be unfair to him. This needs to happen when no cloud is looming over them. I am sure to be out voted.
This Bella is fascinating, because I have never seen one so short tempered. You might even call her Feisty. Oh wait! That's the horse. Fiery? No...that would be in poor taste. Oh well, I just never know how she is going to react, and I love that.
Onward my menstruating leader!
Chapter 11
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Wow! I was so convinced that the cock-blocking would lose the vote. See...this is what I get for doubting. I love that you allowed a little bit of citrusy UST in there, though.
I love that K-Mart was the gates to Hell. So fucking funny. Also, did you mean for the price of the Tic-Tacs to be Pi, because woman, if you did, I will commence humping your leg for eternity.
Devil as a sexy bastard is perfect. I never understood why he was portrayed so often as some ugly beast. That dude is a suave, sexy MoFo who could talk the panties off a nun. Or in this case, an angel. Glad Bella kept her head for the time being, and hopefully she realizes what a bargaining chip she has if she is truly a prize the devil desires.
No James POV necessary for me.
Chapter 10
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GAH! I'm torn. I'm always down for a good lemon, but the moment doesn't seem right for me. He's moving forward out of feelings of love, and she is using him as a tool to dull the pain for a while. So I vote no, because it would be unfair to him. This needs to happen when no cloud is looming over them. I am sure to be out voted.
This Bella is fascinating, because I have never seen one so short tempered. You might even call her Feisty. Oh wait! That's the horse. Fiery? No...that would be in poor taste. Oh well, I just never know how she is going to react, and I love that.
Onward my menstruating leader!
Chapter 11
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Wow! I was so convinced that the cock-blocking would lose the vote. See...this is what I get for doubting. I love that you allowed a little bit of citrusy UST in there, though.
I love that K-Mart was the gates to Hell. So fucking funny. Also, did you mean for the price of the Tic-Tacs to be Pi, because woman, if you did, I will commence humping your leg for eternity.
Devil as a sexy bastard is perfect. I never understood why he was portrayed so often as some ugly beast. That dude is a suave, sexy MoFo who could talk the panties off a nun. Or in this case, an angel. Glad Bella kept her head for the time being, and hopefully she realizes what a bargaining chip she has if she is truly a prize the devil desires.
No James POV necessary for me.
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