A Rough Start, Ch. 17
Still the mystery of Edward's relationship with his parents lingers. I love that you have left that up in the air still.
Now, the kiss...THE KISS!!! It was the right moment. You seem to know the right moment to dissipate the UST like no other. You take us right to the edge where we can't think we can stand it anymore, and send us tumbling over the edge with a single kiss that many can't do with the hottest of lemons.
Once again, your characters are so rich and real. They feel like someone you know, and I think it lends itself to the reader caring about them.
PSA: SOMETIMES PAPER IS JUST PAPER, PEOPLE. ::wink::
Still the mystery of Edward's relationship with his parents lingers. I love that you have left that up in the air still.
Now, the kiss...THE KISS!!! It was the right moment. You seem to know the right moment to dissipate the UST like no other. You take us right to the edge where we can't think we can stand it anymore, and send us tumbling over the edge with a single kiss that many can't do with the hottest of lemons.
Once again, your characters are so rich and real. They feel like someone you know, and I think it lends itself to the reader caring about them.
PSA: SOMETIMES PAPER IS JUST PAPER, PEOPLE. ::wink::
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